Idea 1

Idea 2 [»Victim«]

• 2 guys arguing.
(One holding pile of papers).
• one with papers walks outside, 2nd guy follows him still arguing.
• 2nd guy smacks 1st guys papers into air (they fall to the ground-credits on some of the papers).
• 1st guy grabs 2nd guy and pushes him up against a fence.
• 1st guy head butts 2nd guy to the floor and proceeds to pick up papers and walk away.
• 2nd guy (on floor) gets phone out and more credits are on the screen.
• he then dials a number and says "I need something taken care of".
• cutaway to person on other end of phones mouth and phone smiling (evil smile + "no problem").
• cut back to 2nd guy shouting "they're coming for you" (laugh + cough) "they're coming".
• cut to 1st guys face "of course they are, mate".
• time lapse of place - more people come past - some help 2nd guy up - gets darker.
• 1st guy comes back and finds a note on the floor covered in blood "behind you".
• group of thugs come from behind 1st guy and put bag (with credits on it) over his head and beat him up.
• drag him to van (with credits on side).
• put him in the back and drive away.
• fade to black.
• camera shot to represent 1st guys eyes opening.
• view of inside van from 1st guys perspective (distorted view - tilted camera angle).
• music playing in van.
• shot to represent eyes closing.
• Fade to black again.
• Shot of van pulling up in remote location
• Shot of the wheel as the van comes to a stop
• shot of just the feet and lower leg of one of the men getting out of the van and going to the back of the van
• van rear doors being opened - match on action (camera behind men on outside, then camera in front of men on inside).
• 1st guy being pulled out and dragged towards a tree with a noose tied to a low hanging branch.
• close up of 1st guy in sheer terror "NO".
• shot, cut, zoom, shot, cut, zoom, shot, cut, zoom etc...on the noose.
• immediate cut to black.
• title of film fades in.
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